Shadows step into
the moon's light, elongate
into imagination....
Here
amoung cave dwellers
painting the scene of an ancient hunt
I am
a dreamwalker walking through the
red dust of desire
The sea is a symphony--
I hear waves crashing
a thousand
cicadas climbing their insect legs
into the drum beat of night
Into the rhythm of blue violins
playing a tzigane rhapsody
the veil of day falls
now
the dream meets the dreamer
a thousand nightfalls ago
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alterations
"a dreamwalker walking through the
red dust of desire"
in my changes in my read of this
I placed these words
"a dreamwalker seeking in
dusts red desire
A symphony of seas-
their waves crash
a thousand cicadas
climbing insect legs
the dark beat of night"
just my view of your descriptive wonderful
poem!
Thank You
hi there
That 1st stanza is one of the best I've read here in a long time even though it Doesn't rhyme lol.."cicadas climb their insect legs............I visualize a contortionist inect rolling around trying to climb itself.........which is good for a smile...............stan
I thought...
that the first few lines, the best of all!
Shadows step into
the moon's light, elongate
into imagination....
Lovely
As always I miss reading your work and I hope by now you have compiled your poetic masters in a book Anna. This is really good and I heard the noise and seen the vision in my mind as I read.
Now that is what makes a great Poetess - poetry that leaves much to the imagination. Miss reading your work and happy to see you are still here.
Love Mona