You returned most unwittingly
baring your soul and your arm,
while I saw clouds, you tried on shrouds
never meaning any harm;
I think of you, I feel the warm;
I think of you and feel the warm.
~
Ships always pass, but the neglected mass
never knows to question, "why?"
I really wish I knew, what am I to do?
When together if we could fly;
we'd touch the ceiling of the sky!
~
There's another fact, don't know how to act
your smokey nature calls to me!
Time after time, again; my familiar friend
has shared her company; to set me, "free!"
When she should have just let me be;
I still feel the warm, just let me be.
~
Ships blindly pass, and the neglected mass
never knows to question, "why?"
I could have rocked with you, but what am I to do?
you thought we were merely, getting high;
to me we touched the ceiling of the sky!
~
Comments
Doc
From this one and a few of your recent poems do I detect a change in style that just needs a while to settle down???????
Your older works were both serious and fun yet they had a song about them that kept my eye to the page, the eye seemed to wander or become stuck with this nearly new way of expression..
I hope that your flow will become as you think it should be, Yours Ian.T