I AM Being
Oblivious Grace, Eternal Serenity
awareness ebbed
languidly infused
undisturbed, ubiquitous
Thought stirs essence
a seed of need quivers, a fidget
flutters the fabric
irradiates a candle far away
now to be forever perceived
rippling breeze gently brushes substance
a yawn takes space from me
a spark of perception
I own interest
a quest incites energy
born exploding a singularity
colourful bursts of vibrant brilliance
shatter the dark
light streams -
swirls magically in whirlpools of incandescence
a gasp
within, a knowing is allowed
i am manifest
freely wrapping, vaguely knotting
roaming
gathering knowledge
endlessly
through myriad experience
illustrious time
immeasurable emotion
occasionally to circle back
for a Day in Benevolent Grace
until a dream again stirs desire
and boredom compels to explore
to remember
no destination
forever somewhere
Comments
dreams of beaut y
"undisturbed, ubiquitous"
fave line
languor about this thats pleasant
and a sharp underlying meaning
about taking that pause midstep
for me anyway to examine
something more then just
the sense of the ordinary
exquisite Judyanne
Thank You!
hi esker
thank you very much for the great comments
so glad you could relate to this
love judy
xxxx
Faultless,
Faultlessly fabulous piece of poetry, great to readout loud, love it. Love Roscoe...
hi roscoe
thank you very much for the read and great comments
muchly appreciated
love judy
xxx
Dear Judy,
Roscoe is so right! This piece is a MUST to be reat out loud! Breathtaking!
always, Cat
dear cat
thank you so very much for the read and the very supportive comment
love judy
xxxx
Tossed in the leaves of
Tossed in the leaves of ancient thoughts
your spring poem gives a vitality to its message,
clothed in words of colourful description,
we can read this many times
and each time get something else...from somewhere!
annanya
roving down the corridors of a hospy i looked around
at every sister,
but couldn't find one like you
wow…
I begged for dictionary to improve my vocabulary ,
they all laughed at me
mad maybe!
ask for oxygen or an intravenous injection
or take one a side maybe…
what blasted dictionary
I had to come home to bathe in your loveliest
of loveliest poetry
until a dream again stirs desire
and boredom compels to explore
to remember .........wonder f u l l l l l l