He was the good son
and brother, as well;
with a hunger for living
he couldn't quite quell;
his life was his family
'til he sent them, away;
my friend Red, cannot come out to play.
~
Quite tortured in life
Red still wore a smile,
inspiring awe
but, that was Red's style;
a sponsor, a mentor,
a student of the day;
Red's hope began slipping away.
~
What I remember of Red is,
he'd never condone,
or explain his behavior
to leave his loved-ones alone;
he could've straightened things out
if he'd had one, more day;
and, that's something my friend Red, would say.
~
Needing answers, and closure
his wife, daughter, and son,
wonder "why" Red gave up
a life, they'd just begun?
Each promise towards sobriety
Red seemed to betray;
now, my memories of Red.....are just, gray.
Comments
hi doc
'he could've straightened things out
if he'd had one, more day;' - how many times have i heard that?
i like the way you have set this out
good rhythm and rhyme
and a great finish
love judy
Hi Judy Anne!
I thank you, and treasure the fact that you liked this effort!
sincerely,
doc.