I was flying last week
My co-passenger was from
'' Holland''
I felt twas my good luck
traversing the seven seas
with your perfumed poetry...
I nearly asked of him
then fell short of words,
he ought to have known
the poet in you
Ma'am....
I was flying last week
My co-passenger was from
'' Holland''
I felt twas my good luck
traversing the seven seas
with your perfumed poetry...
I nearly asked of him
then fell short of words,
he ought to have known
the poet in you
Ma'am....
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Loved
This went right over my head, i shall wait for others to talk of this.
There seems to be a story but needs finishing, Yours Ian.T
yes I was flying
and a guy from ma'am Anns place
was my co passenger
so I thought he would have known
the poet we all know
but in person
that's about all.