lou
lou
Jan 16, 2012

Bitten

Narcotic  grin, agitated 
Demon jaws swallow her whole 
She is afflicted

Savage, insane, horrified and stricken
Terrified She will rip out throats 
As a result of being bitten
  
Holds herself in prone position
Lamenting what has come to pass
Longing to be forgiven

Were wolf lover addicted
To her sensuality   
Stalking her in the undergrowth , undetected  

Fatal collision only one will survive 
Tooth and claw
Who will be victorious and end the fight alive?

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda

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Comments

Candlewitch

Very apt title! this piece flows very well and I like the direction in which it takes me. Suductively dark! I like these lines:

Were wolf lover addicted
To her sensuality
Stalking her in the undergrowth , undetected

the ending is a sad asumption that one of them must die. Why can't they meet (be over taken) and mate? Just my suggestion. I like the idea of werewolf lovers, LOL!

always, Cat