Ball breaker , heart taker
Urban slut, fuck that
Man eater, Micky taker,
Should know her place.
Hell no.
Foul mouth, hardened
Bitch, slag , bites back
Revenge, on the attack.
To all those who
Attempt to label
Her fuck that
Dec 02, 2010
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About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Lou
Lou,
well you just rant away!
Great aggression!
HS
Lol
I was going for the minimal approach.. lol
I had a poem posted on here earlier , and when I came back to update it, there was only half the poem on the page, so I deleted it.
I've added the poem again.
Lou
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In the distant future when you cease to worry so about others' opinions, you might consider saying what you really mean...............lmao........scribbler
Stan
I always say what I mean lol
This poem is not auto biographical, it is just a means to convey an attitude, that of the subject and the people who judge her. A work of fiction , created purely from the imagination.
Lou x
Xena
thanks
lou