t. reflexion
t. reflexion
Nov 29, 2011

SOME FREE GIFTS

We call it ‘awuff’,
Free gifts
Surpluses sometimes
Free loaders like a whole lot
Some people say it runs the stomach
It is free, they won’t stop loading
Till the stomach is filled up with junks

Most people clamour for such things
They say, after all, life is free
Even the air we breath
So they accumulate, amass and collect
Freely from those who give the needy
For givers are said to be rewarded more
And blessed than those who receive

For those with reservations
Giving different reasons to say no
Like beggars, they feel branded
Reduced in dignity and status
The snare may lie there
In a trap set ominously
To force a compromise
To further a wrong

Gifts are not free
When conditions are attached
Like giving a yam tuber to a would be voter
Or brown envelope to the news reporter
To kill a true story and pervert justice
Beware of some aids
The virus kills the beneficiary

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: NGA

Favorite Poets: Inspired by an article in an old manuscript

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Comments

wesley snow

I had to go back and read again. Sorry, I'm kinda dense. Strong poem and good to see someone messing with the form.
wesley