Candlewitch
Candlewitch
Oct 14, 2011

Bad Witch/Good Witch

Bad Witch/Good Witch

sisters of the cauldron
stirring potions in the night
eye of newt and bat wing
for your ghoulish appetite

when brew 'tis made and done
they will happily conspire
a deadly spell of malice
while dancing round the fire

on night of All Hallows Even
drawing magic circles in the sand
they rise and play joining
with ghost and skeleton band

Good witches which there are few
on this night don't stand a chance
for all their deeds of good
should avoid the evil dance

so if you are a good witch
stay within your circle unharmed
for if you break the enchantment
you could be evilly charmed

About This Poem

Last Few Words: A Halloween Treat!

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About the Author

Region, Country: Northwestern Wisconsin USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe

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Comments

M

i have rto come back cant type now ... dance around the fire i will sbe there golden lady hugs xoxo

did you mean hallows eve or hallows even?

Hooded Stranger

Hooded Stranger

13 years 6 months ago

Cat,

this has a real feel of halloween and was a joy to read.

I never knew there were good witches and bad ones!

this was a fun write indeed.

Maybe a typo?..."on night of All Hallows Even"..."Eve"

Happy Halloween!...which is a contradiction really! Lol!

HS

lou

lou

13 years 6 months ago

been called an old witch, LOL!!!

Good stuff

Lou