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Aug 18, 2011

You My Dears

You My Dears

You are poetic dear
I have to scientifically endear,
I do hope you all do hear

Albeit

I’d like to from you all individually hear...
The burst,
The tear,
The clouds,
the crowds
The thunder
the clap,
All are
and
shall be enlightened by poetry
Which undoubtedly you do bear
And
I dare say
I can ever at all compare...

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: ROU

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Comments

Candlewitch

Very nicely done. Just one small thing:

in this line remove one of the "are"

You are are poetic dear

always, Cat

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13 years 8 months ago

since yesterday
I have been rather dozy
but ur observation has
now made me cozy

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13 years 8 months ago

friends where are you all