My friend is hurting bad
way down deep inside,
makes me want to run away!
It's difficult
his grief to hide;
How the passion "stirs", from Alize~.
Never met this woman,
but what's true is true
this passion I feel, is real!
Sad is this day,
and every day that's "blue"!
This passion of Alize~, I feel.
Remember all these days,
when they come along,
it's when someone good goes away;
one who gave so very much!
Then, Life ends their song,
that's the passion.....of Alize~.
Last Few Words: When someone passes, or falls in "love", they seem to flock to a "poet",or someone to say "the right words".....but, those words don't always come. This was the best I could come up with; I DID feel the "blue passion", though. Plus, I felt his sorrow. sincerely, doc.
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction: [This option has been removed]
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
Thanx, Rosi....
...for your comments. I knew about the spelling error as soon as I saw the finished product; but I can't seem to edit anything!
I did like your poem for your sister...the difference being that, I knew not, this woman. So, I had to write about something I DID know abut...and those were those "blues".
I disagree with the exclamation mark, as it wasn't a quote.....but, I sincerely appreciate everytime you offer your pearls of wisdom to me!
Thanx. For everytime.
docmaverick.
p.s.) Her name is pronounced lik the liquor.....Al-is-ay.