When I think of you,
a flood of pleasures
flow gently
on rivers in my mind
The memories
we have made together
out last all other life's
which I have lived.
Everything else
is just faded dreams
dissipating like
morning mist on the bays
I live in the present
enjoying each moment
as treasures long searched
with no value outside
our secret realm
You have made me
young again
with just a word or
a simple tender touch
the look of your eyes
which said "I love you very much"
Awakened
is my heart once more
and I can hear the love
beating in yours
But yet, I can only
speak for myself.
I am filled
for I have taken the cup
and drank of you.
Where Ponce De Leon
Failed to find
"The fountain of youth"
I have found you.
Comments
Splash
In the fountain.. got to say one thing and nothing more than this. Nice Eddie. Nice
I really like this part the best:
Where Ponce De Leon
Failed to find
"The fountain of youth"
I have found you.
Happy for you
Mona
xox
Mona
Thank you!
Yes, I am happy almost to bust!
"when you see it, don't waste time. grab it and hold it. scream out, I am in love!"
Eddie
PS. you know that this is sexual. It refers to a womans loveliness.
Yes
I know it is sexual just as the fountain of youth is:) I am happy for you also. Che Bello!
Mona
Yeah!!
I just finish talking to her, and she sent me a picture. Im in heaven. I just love being me right now at this point in my life. this is my moment!
Eddie
Ian
I thank you, but I think you were trying to say Puerto Rico.
Still funny.Hahaha!
Regards,
Eddie
Kal
your to damn much.
most of what you have said seems right, but there one thing. I have already gave it to my lady. She got the point and thought it sweetand funny
So I appreciate the correction. but right now it's lost to the wind. I will not spoil it for her with a re-write.
Please keep coming with your comments they do help for other writes I may have in mind
Thanks Kal
Eddie
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more abt the fountain
once i read it again
tomorrow