Earn A Poem Workshop 1

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This poem is part of the contest:

Neopoet Weekly Contest 04/14/24 to 04/20/24 🏆 Winner

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It takes so long to let her live,

From way down deep, of herself, she shall give.

Innocent, unaware, helped with most care.

My love or my hell, to be done so well.

For weeks I sat and thought of her.

The words I write for her do say,

My love through night and through the day,

You surely live a lonely way.

Doubt and re-doubt.

Each line a part sought,

Each word carefully brought.

Thought and re-thought,

Taken to a whole,

Remains part of my soul.

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

Region, Country: Moody Street, USA

Favorite Poets: Black Mountain

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have a voice! It says volumes. An affirmation of love. Nicely done sir. ~ Geez.
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Hello, Mark,
I can sense the need for the words to be precise and carefully chosen. A tender, thoughtful poem.
Thank you,
L

Congrats Marky-Mark!

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Mikey likes it!
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on your win! Nicely done. ~ Geez.
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