Dystopia
Dystopia
Feb 27, 2024
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Neopoet Weekly 02/25/24 to 03/02/24

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The In-Between

Concealed in the darkness of time,
Gone are the wondrous years of my prime,
My thread never sliced by the fates,
Untouched by death’s unforgiving gates,
I do not live nor am I dead,
To Cronos I forever pled,
Becoming free from residing in between,
Let me roam to where I am once again seen,
Fearsome I am certainly not,
A vow of obedience I have brought,
Not agreeing to free my deserving self,
You will soon feel the wrath of my full health,
I will enjoy returning to where I was once loved,
And never again into this insanity will I be shoved,
I will bring righteousness to this world again,
Even if I have to meet the end of all ends.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Canada

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Comments

Candlewitch

It is very nice to meet you! Your poem put me in mind of Piers Anthony's Incarnations Of Immortality series, which I really enjoyed! my favorite lines are:

My thread never sliced by the fates,
Untouched by death’s unforgiving gates,
I do not live nor am I dead,
To Cronos I forever pled,

*Always, Cat