Symbolizing the sacrifice of lord himself,
this day makes us feel the power of humanity.
but do we still feel this eternal love?
do we have peaceful minds without fake vanity?
Lord jesus must be wondering at his wonder,
the world,the people,who cannot hear,
the crescendo in their own souls,a wonder...
Evil spirits are ruling this livelihood,
making the mighty's creatures looking unearthly...
So much greed,anger,war,devil's destruction,
low cost of life,high cost of death.
May the world today,Good friday 2011,
realize the means of this day,
may they realize the sacrifice,
the still living earth,
may they feel the zest to live...
Heavens return,dandelions grow,
divinity break the uncanny silence,
Elixir,the life reassures peace...
Hope for heavens heave...
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Hello Arshiyafairy
Jesus showed the power of humanity. Love that line
But do we feel the love he showed? It takes knowledge and understanding.
Evil spirits are ruling this livelihood,
making the mighty's creatures looking unearthly... ( Maybe look unearthly )
So much greed,anger,war,devil's destruction,
low cost of life,high cost of death. Love this stanza - gets to the heart of mankinds problems.
Lord jesus must be wondering at his wonder,
the world,the people,who cannot hear, ( I wondered if it would be better to put "who will not hear")
up to you though.
I liked the positive end.
I enjoyed this thought provoking piece.
Thanks for sharing
Love Mand xxxxxxx
Thanx 4 ur suggestion,i'll
Thanx 4 ur suggestion,i'll see 2 it.
Amen
That is all I would like to say on this write. Thank you for writing it
Blessings
Mona
Thanx 2 lemme know mah
Thanx 2 lemme know mah mistakes... :)