Candlewitch
Candlewitch
Dec 10, 2023

2023 New Year's Image Prompt

It has been a roller-coaster ride
This Slip stream mounted slide
Oft' times we must partake and abide

Out with the olden days
Let us come out of the haze
with a well turned phrase

On the appointed hour raise
your voices and glasses in praise
As we promise new ways in coming days

Let there be lilting mirth
raise your voices high
on the eve of our rebirth!

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Region, Country: Northwestern Wisconsin USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe

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