Empty nest lingers
as bare branch sends off
its last leaf ~
...things left behind.
Nov 12, 2023
Abandoned
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Thoughts of autumn - in nature as in life.
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Deep
A short poem but deep meaning behind it. There is something final about autumn as the old die off and we wait for the new to be born in the spring. Each beautiful in its own way. Wonderful poem
Hello, Carrie,
Just walked around and noticed the quiet feeling of fall and what remained. Much like different phases of our lives.
Thank you, as always, for reading!
L
dearest Lavender,
very poignant, like a whispered prayer!
*love, Cat
Hello, Cat,
You are always so kind, and you are right. Walking around and observing so silently felt like praying / meditating.
Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts!
L