ADVICE TO BUDDING POETS. (BY ONE NOT QUALIFIED TO DO).

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "ADVICE TO BUDDING POETS. (BY ONE NOT QUALIFIED TO DO)" presents a clear and encouraging message to aspiring poets. It emphasizes the importance of self-expression and the freedom to create without fear of criticism.

However, there are areas that could be improved for a more compelling and engaging read.

1. Consistency in Rhyme Scheme: The poem starts with an ABAB rhyme scheme in the first stanza, but this is not consistently followed in the subsequent stanzas. Maintaining a consistent rhyme scheme can provide a rhythmic flow that enhances the reading experience.

2. Use of Imagery: While the poem does use some imagery ("tempests wild or seas serene"), it could benefit from more detailed and vivid descriptions. This can help to create a more immersive experience for the reader.

3. Punctuation: The poem lacks consistent punctuation. For example, the first stanza uses commas and question marks, but the second stanza does not use any punctuation. Consistent punctuation can help to guide the reader through the poem and clarify the intended pauses and stops.

4. Word Choice: The phrase "That words flow as a song" could be rephrased for more impact. Instead of telling the reader that words should flow like a song, the poem could show this through the use of rhythmic language and musical imagery.

5. Metrical Structure: The poem does not seem to follow a consistent metrical structure. A consistent meter can provide a rhythmic flow and enhance the musicality of the poem.

Overall, while the poem's message is clear and encouraging, it could benefit from more attention to form, imagery, punctuation, word choice, and metrical structure.

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Hello, Alex,
First, I believe you are very qualified to give advice. :) This is such a nice, smooth poem. The rhythm is easy and calming, and the use of "My Friend" throughout gives the poem a pleasant and inviting feeling. There is the wonderful sense of appreciation and love for poetry.
Thank you!
L

I agree. Although there are certain caveats to such advice, and if one was allowed to chuck all the rules of language and write whatever, without any sense of reason, our world would become a shambles. Imagine if one were to write that; a circle of whorls is too many parts of 9th degrees to the second part of ten. The world of language and poetry would soon fall into utter gibberish. I do agree that our words should be our own, but let's not let people rhyme without reason. Just because a word sounds or looks the same, it doesn't mean that it is right. There are rules to any language that preserve the structure so that we can all recognize its meanings. I applaud the thought that we should allow a poet's words to be their own, and hope that we will never forget that as poets, we have the right to speak our minds. A great job of that reminder. And yes, I do believe that you are qualified to give advice. ~ Geez.
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