MindOfGator
MindOfGator
Jul 31, 2023
This poem is part of the challenge:

July 2023 Challenge Describe a Sunday morning

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Sunday

On Sundays, let the dreamers take control
Coffee, books, and hooded sweaters, role
Naps to restore, snacks to nourish each soul
Messy buns and glasses, enter the day with a goal

Let imaginations run wild, and dreams unfold
To explore, discover, to be ten times bold
A happy, blissful peace unlike no other day
Conspired by the Lord above, with fortune and fate to play

Sacrifice sleep today, time last forever
Though Sunday hastens away, bear the bliss together
For this day I wish none ever find end
But in memories, remain close to our hearts and minds

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: U.S.A.

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allen Poe

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