Is he someone special?
This Norm I hear about
I'd like to look him up
call his number, give a shout
They say he's everyone
but I don't recognise his face
How can he be like me?
I'm not even in the race
What does he do for living?
Where does this bastard live?
I would truly like to meet him
Oh, what I wouldn't give
I'm measured up against him
I hear his name at every turn
Why should I be like him?
Man, it makes me burn!
They say he is composed
He doesn't often rage
I'd punch him in the mouth
I would rattle up his cage
So, one more time I hear his name
I'll use him to mop the floor
I'll put him in his place
They won't compare us anymore!
Comments
Neopoet AI (premium)
The below is a computer generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:
The poem "Who Is Norm?" explores themes of identity and comparison, as the speaker questions the significance of a person named Norm. The use of informal language and strong emotions adds to the overall tone of frustration and jealousy. However, the poem's lack of structure and inconsistent rhyme scheme detracts from its overall effectiveness.
One suggested line edit could be: "They say he's like everyone" instead of "They say he's everyone," to better convey the idea that Norm is a relatable figure rather than an omnipresent one.
Overall, while the poem effectively conveys the speaker's feelings of inadequacy and resentment towards Norm, it would benefit from tighter structure and more consistent language choices.
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Ol' Iron Arse missed the mark
Ol' Iron Arse missed the mark again HaHA...
I wouldn't worry too much
I wouldn't worry too much about Norm,
You've got the bugger beat Geez.,
Obi.
I guess...
I'll have to go adjust his ass! A few good kicks in his nuts, should help make him a little less inclined to mess with me! I think he must have burned out a chip or something. He doesn't seem to understand that "Norm is short for normal. His vagaries are a little less than the "norm" lately. Ha, ha!
Thanks Obie, ~ Geez.
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Actually, I'm warming to him,
Actually, I'm warming to him,
whilst ultimately hoping he reaches half way up then gets left behind, but,
he is interesting.
Obi.
I've been...
been warming up to Mr. AI too, but I think he's been into my magic cookies! He seems to have lost a step or two. He was doing great, and then I don't know what happened. ~ Geez.
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Norm
Not a particular fan of his either...I say we pay a visit to him and to hell with his way of thinking!! I think your great without Norm.
I think Norm...
could use a little adjustment, he seems to think he's a big deal. Everyone is saying we should meet the 'norm'. I don't think I want to be in his clique. He seems rather boring and just like everybody else! Thanks for the read and back-up. If I ever get to meet him, I will give you a call and find out what is so great about meeting the "Norm". ~ Geez.
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I'm so glad...
you liked this one. I thought you might, seeing as how you don't seem to be "normal" either. Gee, I kind of like the sound of that! Geezer the Great! Hmmm, I can see it now; a parade, dinners, keys to the city... LoL Thanks for the read and comments. ~ Geez.
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Really?...
Free babysitting services for shoppers? Now that's a novel thing! ~ Geez.
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dear Geezer,
I believe there is no such thing as normal. we are all fucsed-up you usually surprise me. in our own special way. the only normal who meet the status quo are the dead. and that includes the brain dead, too. I like your poem. your title gave it all away, lol! what the hell is normal? the poem is entertaining and holds deeper meaning than AI can fathom.
* love, Cat
I think that...
the AI is great for technical stuff but has to work on its people-skills. I think he is being sent back to the factory for additional training. Basically a nice guy, just a little weak on the emotional level. ~ Geez.
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Norm
I'm quite normal, it's only the doctors who don't believe me. Damn. Locked in again. Alex
Yeah...
I had some trouble with that too! Fortunately, I have experience with nursing homes and old people, so I can pass for just an old person not quite in possession of all my faculties. They just open the doors and set me free! Try it, I think it will work for you too. ~ Geezer.
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