lovedly
lovedly
Mar 16, 2023

TRYING HAIKU SEXY BYTE

Best way to pass time
is to waste it
about a small waist...

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Geezer

to do with your vacation? I'm hoping that those cocktail bars on the beach have a few half-naked waitresses to serve the
panting old men, who tip recklessly for a peek at a future they have already passed. LoL
~ Geez.
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lovedly

and funny Gee
so many pass by
few now read or comment
even those who call me
BRO
You know
LOL
Thus now I really miss jess I confess
his possible comment
now u guess...

Geezer

we have so many poets here now, that it is hard to comment on all. I try hard, but I can't get to everyone. I will always try to get the old guard though. You deserve to be acknowledged, not that others don't, but you are a constant. ~ Geez.
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Lavender

Hello, Lovedly,
So much up for interpretation here... I believe you are on the dance floor with your enchanting partner, doing the salsa. :)
Lav