Rain Story

As the rain fell around her,
she wanted to feel the downpour on her face.
To feel anything other than the rage
of the wild world all about her
would be a welcome change.

Grateful, she tossed the umbrella aside
and let the deluge speak to her
as she hoped it would.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: So much rain in Cali this winter. Happy to have it, and it inspired this piece.

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft