Marriage

She was for me,love
Forever placed within my heart
She was for me strength

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Region, Country: USA Pennsylvania, USA

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Comments

Hello, Clentin,

What a gracious haiku. You both are very fortunate. Is this poem created to mark an anniversary, perhaps?
L

55 years

Congratulations!

The feeling is well captured in your poem.
L

Dear Clentin

This is just Brilliant, you've written such a beautiful tribute to your love, congratulations on 55yrs that is an amazing achievement in this day and age.

Here is to many more. <3

hugs Jayne x

Thank you. I will be reading

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