Clentin
Feb 19, 2023
This poem is part of the contest:

Neopoem Of The Week February 19th to February 25th 2023

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Prayer

Spoken from within
Begging for help from above
Listening with hope

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: USA Pennsylvania, USA

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Seren

Seren

2 years 2 months ago

Whatever your faith this is a prayer all can relate to, it's a universal poem that anyone could take something away from, I have to say for three lines it packs a punch.

Well done!!

Kind Regards Seren

C

Thank you. I am new at this poetry business but really want to try different forms.
Please feel free to make any comments as well as suggestions when reading any of my poems.
Again, thanks

Seren

This is a perfect little gem as it sits, I found nothing to critique! Welcome to Neopoet, I hope to be round more this week and I will look for more of your work when time permits.

Kind Regards, Seren.

RoseBlack

I agree with Seren. Three lines say so much. You are a very talented writer and I have enjoyed your works thus far. I look forward to seeing more.

Lavender

Hello, Clentin,
The art and miracle of prayer - the humbleness in asking, and the wisdom and faith in listening. Thank you for this!
L

Rosewood Apothecary

“I would choose my own religion, worship my own spirit
But if he ever preached to me I wouldn’t want to hear it
I’d drop him a forgotten god, languishing in shame
And then if I hit stormy seas I’d have myself to blame.”

Tom Marshall

I don’t pray so much. I have faith in abundance.

Nice job
Tim

Jackweb

encapsulates the body of the poem. That's what it truly is. Our heart is truly, the communication center between us and God. And we hope for what we ask in prayer to come to fruition. Beautiful poem.
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