Rula
Rula
Feb 06, 2023
This poem is part of the contest:

Tomorrow Is Another Day

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Tomorrow Is Another Day

Tomorrow I'll repent of all my sins
and write away a new history
I shall quit all the caffeines
and take a good care of poor me.

I'll cut down on the junkie foods
I won't keep awake till the wee hours
I'll try out more green stuffs and fruits
to nourish with super powers

I won't break the traffic rules
or bully anyone on my way
I won't quibble or fuss with fools
tomorrow is another day.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and

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Comments

Jackweb

I believe this was coming from a repented soul. Getting excess caffeine out of your system is just the decision you have just taken. May it truly work out for you.

Too much intake of stuffs leads to undisciplined life. I honestly believe, a good state of mind would lead to self control and obedience.
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Rula

Rula

2 years 2 months ago

Many thanks for taking the time to read and comment.

Lavender

Hello, Rula,
Very clever take on the contest theme. I really enjoy it all, but the second to the last line is the best!
Well done!
L

RoseBlack

I love what you did with the theme to this challenge. Every day is a chance to start over and be better than the one before! Thank you for the reminder! Well done!

lovedly

tomorrow never comes but when it does its another today and today is buried as a gone by yesterday Now repeat after me you may have a good day