Jackweb
Jackweb
Jan 28, 2023

THE POETIC SAILOR

silence sails
on poet's bed
a traveling mind
with ethereal beauty
set for poetic adventures

©® Onyinyechi Cosmos Etu

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Imo State - Republic of Biafra(Nigeria), NGA

Favorite Poets: Late Christopher Okigbo

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Comments

Candlewitch

a beautiful short piece that makes me think of sailing the warm waters of one's dreams! good work!

*hugs, Cat

Geezer

of sailing into a safe harbor. Easy to read and drift away. ~ Geez.
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Lavender

Hi, Jackweb,
This is smooth and easy-going. A lovely read. The shape of the poem adds to the mood and feeling.
Thank you!
L