At times remaining silent
conveys
all about a million miles
he also must be missing
smile at him
he'd be also needing
love does not come easily
oh dear lovely beauty
At times remaining silent
conveys
all about a million miles
he also must be missing
smile at him
he'd be also needing
love does not come easily
oh dear lovely beauty
Last Few Words: Making up with a lost Ex
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Tata
Short but saying so much!! I really love this one. I offer nothing but praise on a excellent write.
Much Love & a big hug J x
Seren you want to elevate me if so...
pick up a poetic sledge hammer
and let me know
how brains can also blow
Hmmm I'll write a poem for
Hmmm I'll write a poem for you :)
That should blow your socks off at least lol
Hugs xxx
wow
I won't sleep tonight
am anxious Seren
you too decided in favor of
lovedly
I just posted a poem about my
I just posted a poem about my Dad. I can't post till tomorrow at the earliest. I will start on it when I wake up.
Hugs xxx
YES I UNDERSTAND
Seren good night
The sun's peeking out now.
The sun's peeking out now. Time I went to bed. I am going to spend my Saturday afternoon reading and commenting on poems.
Much love J xxx
Thanks Mark
you've come after years missed a few good ones
alas!