Wanting to Passionately Know

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Hello,, My Name is Gerald Lee, I'm a single father of a wonderful 13 year old boy. I've been passionate about creative writing since I was very young and in doing so, managed to be awarded twice the Akarmans Young Authors Award and got to go to the Windsor Public Library and Got to actually meet Robert Munches. While growing up, I wrote in my free time, and entered other various contest's, and earned placement in those as well. I don't write for others,,I write for Myself and lately I have begun to realize that I have been given a great gift from Powers Much Greater than I'll ever know, and if the gift I have been given goes unused and unheard by others,, It will undoubtedly be something that was a waste and should have been a blessing to someone other than Myself. I know I have talent and have been patiently waiting for a chance to be able to get the words I believe can change someone's life if read by them, but that's only if I take a chance and bet on myself, having to leap into the empty space void and have enough faith to know that I'll be alright if I do. Because that's what Faith is Right,,? It's not knowing,or seeing, But Still Believing. And I Believe in Myself because if I don't,,than Who else is going to,,?

Style/Type: Free verse

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