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Nov 25, 2022

CHILL ALSO INSPIRES

Have lived in minus 35 degrees
winter

my it was
chill

as snow flakes
sheared my eyes

when I used to fetch my
GCS

My they were so
impressed

loved me
hugged me
of course 'em
I kissed

my then bent back
straightened up

what darn
chill!

About This Poem

Last Few Words: EVEN CHILL FLAMES HUMANS

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Triskelion

..darned my dang dungarees..the wind was whistling right through them. -35C...I almost said darn, but dang sang.

Thomas

Triskelion

I'm darning my dang dungarees
for the horrible holes in the knees
though you might think it silly
but my willy gets chilly
when it hangs below zero degrees

Thomas