lovedly
lovedly
Nov 22, 2022

SWORDS IN MY TUMMY

Still struggling
is TIME nigh\
some poet of Neo
to me the path show ...
ere!!!!

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Lavender

Hi, Lovedly,
Would love to know title meaning. I've read this a few times - and will be back to read again after you respond.
Thanks!
Lav

lovedly

rather UNWELL All say age Wait I'M An over-ripe pineapple you know what

But don't through me out yet
Thanks I'll be back soonest rgd

Geezer

to hear you are sick! Shit, you are so enigmatic, that you might have gone to the hospital, recovered and been back again before we knew what the hell is going on! Try just saying something in plain English once in a while! "I am sick and might not be around for a while is a great start." I am sure there are many of us here that will tell you "Get well soon!" Waiting to see some poemies from you! ~ Geez.
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lovedly

I am a self doc
the medical splst told me
if you come
you will just go
where no one knows

I am now well attending routine
slight pain still in tummy

Swords blunted by me LOL

I have traversed worse HELL
TC
I love all who read me
you Gee especially
Iwon't go so easily!!!