Geezer
Geezer
Nov 08, 2022
This poem is part of the workshop:

Euphonious English Workshop Part #1

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It's A Miracle...

I thought the word was marvelous
and so, I wrote it down
Then I looked to see
and the word was really miraculous
Now, what do I do?
I just change the word I thought was marvelous
to make it miraculous
and send it right off to you.

Now, before I send it this time
I will check to make quite sure
that it really is miraculous
and not marvelous
so, I can change it before I do

I mean wouldn't it be a joke
if in between a few tokes
that the word was marvelously
turned into a miracle
and the word was miraculous?

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Region, Country: New York State - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Poe

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Comments

Geezer

it's a pleasure to do something, that requires a little thinking for a change. ~ Geez.
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RoseBlack

What a fun poem! I love the interchanging of marvelous and miraculous. Made for a very lighthearted well written piece.