RISE TO FALL

and fall
it's FALL!

Sundays we arise
God yours not mine
sleeps
where in heaven
don't ask me

I have seen none
till yesterday
I passed across a street
the house builders shop
he displayed a billboard

''A nicely decorated house
fully artistically furnished
lots of fruits on the dining table
HERE LIVES GOD
IN PEACE
'TIS PARADISE''

About This Poem

Last Few Words: STILL SEARCHING PARADISE ....AS THE DICE IS BEING CAST

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

Comments

Rise To Fall

Hi, Lovedly,
Still searching for paradise. "Lots of fruits on the dining table." I guess paradise has different meanings for a lot of us. Lots to think about here...
L

Pardise

is outright
IMAGERY
NONE LIKE EARTH
YET found anywhere
by anyone
in HOPES
we ALL live
Ma'am Lav
glad you alone read me