My night;
a wicked witch
riding a crooked broom,
my dreams flew away
Oct 28, 2022
This poem is part of the contest:
Neopoem Of The Week October 23rd to October 29th 2022
A Wistful Night
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
A Wistful Night
Hello, Rula!
Darn! A wicked witch's worst nightmare! Maybe you can get the broom fixed by Halloween. Very clever poetry! I enjoyed this!
Thank you,
L
Hello Lavender
Much appreciate the read and your kind comment.I too enjoyed writing these lines.
The difficulties
Of riding a crooked broom. Perhaps the witch starts over on the next day and things look better. A simple yet meaningful write.
Hello BB
Always great to see a new friend on my page.
Your comment adds to my day and I too hope things to get better quie soon.
Thank you.
Dear Rula
I thought this was wickedly good.
Well done and congratulations on your win
Kind regards Jayne
Dearest Seren
I'm so pleased you're back.
I can't thank you enough for reading these lines and for commenting.
I'm not sure about winning, but I am thankful anyway.
Looking forward to reading some of your poetry soon dear.