Back when
all that laid ahead
were the unheard
tales of time
tensely twirling
towards tomorrow.
Where our
hollow heedless
heads of hope
would wistfully
follow .
Still strumming
out their
stammering
starless streams
of desolate
undecided
dreams .
Then bashfully
burn out
into blackened
bittersweet
beams of
belittlement.
Oct 22, 2022
This poem is part of the contest:
Neopoem Of The Week October 16th to October 22 2022
Drifting from dreams
About This Poem
Last Few Words: This poem is about how back then we all had dreams that just like a lit match was blown out into oblivion by the weakening winds of reality.
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Drifting From Dreams
Hello, Edward,
"...desolate undecided dreams." The epitome of drifting. Well done.
L
My inspiration
My inspiration was the theme from the movie the sterile cuckoo
https://youtu.be/TEpP7xSL5m8
Wonderful!
Very inspiring!
L