ideas can spread like cancer good or bad to combat this think more objectively
think of people who love the way you are if you have strict or demeaning parents or relatives
dont let that change you to change ideas or conceptionsof people you know or friends
just say something positive forget about high school and things like appearance
Oct 05, 2022
ideas
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Last Few Words: i hope this makes people happier with themselves
Style/Type: Free verse
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