sometimes i feel things i have experienced are like a movies or plays unreal reality.
especially relationships 'they say they love you alot' but they never marred you.
i beleive this is because we have more than one soulmate; most people some only one
its like your picking apples; that look good like theoutside of experiences' but some have worms
Oct 02, 2022
This poem is part of the contest:
Neopoem Of The Week Contest October 2nd to October 8th 2022
reality or dream
About This Poem
Last Few Words: i am reaching out to others who have had experiences like this
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
What makes this a prose poem?
I really don't understand the form.
reality or dream
you worry too much about syntax instead of what i am saying
No, it isn’t syntax.
Just do not understand the form. It looks like you are writing a note to your family member that is away overseas.
Where is the allegory, the illusion, the metaphor? Where is the rhythm inherit that resembles a poem in a stanza form? Where are the note poetic overtones within its meter, repetition, and choice of language?
I have studied prose poetry form, and I do understand the definition as stated on Poetic websites, and formal Creative Writing texts.