EVE OR ADAM
all human creation
both saw
with wide opened eyes
wow
what a difference
apples bananas snakes
peaches oranges
who could ever make mistakes
none even till today
so we all continue to say
repeat it every day
heavens still relay
both have been placed
equal now all say
first come first served
Queen or King
man woman
woe of men
since ages
thence
till ages ever
hence
only born
no dye
in memories lanes we all lay
come over any day
happily recall the gone days
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Our Combined Memories
Hello, Lovedly.
Your title suggests that you've combined poems from Neo, correct? Very interesting! There are a few words that perplex me, but "first come, first served" stands out the most. Your final stanza is sweet and relatable.
Thank you!
L
THE NEW LAW SAYS
first come first served
(BE_) Queen or King
And Lav
I read across the globe
uncloseted
so I freely compose..
All humans are alike
and most if not all have similar
memorable delights
am I not right
never mind
no plight no fight no flight
only memory is
sensitivity