brittle light
brittle light
Mar 27, 2011

Flicking Dust

.
little worlds
spinning
gyrating
dancing?
in the sun

to what music
do they dance?

swaying
and swirling
across the beams
ever so lightly

there must be music!
tiny indescernable bands
or mariachis, maybe?

unimpressed with my presence
or disruptive sigh
they waltz on and on and on
unperturbed

I watch
I wish I could hear their song

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: upstate New York USA, USA

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Comments

Roscoe Lane

We are here but where is here when compared in our universe, maybe the size of dust being flicked. A very thought provoking poem, well writen which makes we wan't music for as long as i'm here.Regards Roscoe.

V

thought provoking poem. I question the question marks. Not sure I undertand the use of the first one.