lovedly
lovedly
Jun 03, 2022

O LOVE ME DAWN ...BUT ///continued///

Whether we will participate
or decimate
is the times dictate
no one can say

I for one can never be sure
the cancer of my EGO
has no cure

I want to achieve
poetic recognition
of money fame
I have no audition

all I want to see
ere I merge with eternity
is mans' wildness of thought
become naught

the I in me should dissolve
like salt, does water absorb.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: FUN COMMENTS MAY READ MINE GALS AND GUYS

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Candlewitch

in this line: no one can (that) say remove (that)
my favorite lines are:

I for one can never be sure
the cancer of my EGO
has no cure

*hugs, Cat

Candlewitch

we are getting into the summer months now. people are busy doing lots of things outdoors. we will see them return in the Autumn, I suspect.

*hugs, Cat

lovedly

Summer is like burning inferno anywhere
now 'tis our turn to bake
or in the seaside merry make
watch gals and modern guys
in bikinis
flying as if with
a see through negligee
both gals and guys are sleek most look so sleek and at their life's peak all follow me silly you may be
life is enjoyable come and see we fly like birds through the wilderness just chase any ah it's your luck at best or worse some guys are better lookers be not jay just for their happiness pray till autumn comes your way lol Cats

lovedly

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