Sad but marvelous
memories remain immortal
we love
we lust
all else we do
we must
but memories
only last
all else does rust
Sad but marvelous
memories remain immortal
we love
we lust
all else we do
we must
but memories
only last
all else does rust
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
dear Lovedly,
this is marvelous! thank you for sharing it with us!
*warm hugs, Cat
Thanks Cats
so many outstanding POETS liked this poem
then I was like OUT STANDING
NOW IN ........>>>>>
LOL
THANKS
Nice!
Apt but with full message.