Entend2u
Mar 13, 2022
This poem is part of the challenge:

Neopoet Random Challenge # 13

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YOU SUCKED MY MILK

You sucked my milk.

Your breath whispered and stuttered as you drank and cooled my skin.
In lamb-like bleats you found your lips could only cope with drips that bubbled on your chin.

But soon you suckled at my breast with snort and snuffle and impatient stare.
You made sure you took your fill as if my milk was yours of right and not of mine to give.

And what was evolution’s aim in making my nipples so soft and supple
whilst endowing teeth on you, before one month, unused on you,
But giving me the hump?

So now you slumber at my breast fulfilled; with milky burps you sleep content.
Your spew has re-designed my dress and I’m so tired I need to rest.

But here you are - my pride and joy.
I love you so much,
......my little boy.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: This is dedicated to my mother, Vera Alice, and her baby, Veronica, who was born on April 23rd. 1944 but died ten days later.

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Not actively editing

About the Author

Country/Region: England

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Comments

Candlewitch

in the first sentence, I think you want (breath) not {breathe}
lovely sentiment and thought. sorry it was not meant to be...

*hugs, Cat

Geezer

having suckled a baby, I wouldn't know firs hand, but I get the lines that say: "You made sure you took your fill, as if my milk was yours of right, and not mine to give." I've seen that look on one of my three sons, as they did the same and looked at me
as though to say, "It's mine now!" LoL ~ Geez.
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E

My three grandsons all enjoyed the rights of man. This poem just came to me a few months ago - although my days of quietly sitting, with eyes averted whilst they took their fill but listening to their lamb like sounds clearly stayed with me for so many years.
Will

Ray Whitaker

nice piece.

I have to ask are you a man or a woman? your page here doesn't mention that [many folks here don't mention it either, by the way]. I ask 'cause there is an insight here as to suckling...