I'm just any others
day's dream
they can see
yet
at night those who dream too
get wet
despite the snow
the hour of meeting me
the sun has to
beget
yet
I'm just any others
day's dream
they can see
yet
at night those who dream too
get wet
despite the snow
the hour of meeting me
the sun has to
beget
yet
Last Few Words: the hungry poeyet
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Not bad.
I'd like to see "yet" at the end of the first stanza, though.
thaks Race
With grace
Use of the stanza lines appeals to me
The 4-3-4 line stanzas work for me. Effective use of white space…
Don’t know what relation the title has to the poem…
Basically Ray
this verse is as an answer to a stupider verse
some poet conversed thanks
anyway