Where is my line?
What is you?
What is me?
Where is the threat?
Where do I step?
My lines get drawn in crayon.
Sep 07, 2021
Crayon Lines
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
owl
So many questions, have you the answers. This can be taken anywhere as far as the imagination could go. I would like to see you expand on this.
Okay... I think I needed the
Okay... I think I needed the push to return and expand the poem. As is, I think it is provocative, but with not much meat on the bones. I will explore answering some of those questions... Thank you