Here I stand
ancient on Queer Street
watchwondering.
Birds float by,
puncturing oblivion
for a nanosecond.
My hairy stems
and purple flowers
recur and spread after removal.
Malignancy.
Standing on a corroded edge,
hoping for a life-saving sign,
a quatrain stirring
rhymes in available space
in my mind.
The tracery on a butterfly’s wing
showers beauty,
quiddity rather than perfection.
Poetry is the recollection
of your body. Noontime.
Shards of un-loving
have crystallized
my weary atom hood.
Ascendancy of desire,
blue noon.
Comments
Some wonderful poetic phrases
Some wonderful poetic phrases throughout this piece, you started off with a great statement ....
"Here I stand
ancient on Queer Street
watchwondering."........... thats just great.
It hints t'ward. Plath.
Muchly enjoyed.
Obi.
Hi Obi, thanks so much for
Hi Obi, thanks so much for dropping by, always welcome to have your thoughts. I'm glad you like it, but I'm certain it's not as good as Plath's! I love her and maybe I sometimes get ideas from her.
I've been away, will look up your poems now.
to comment on your poems
I think a million times
would you perhaps laugh
Oh dear, lovedly, here you go
Oh dear, lovedly, here you go again, as if you don't write wonderful poems yourself...sigh. I would appreciate all your nits, so I hope soon you'll make some.
Best wishes again, Gracy
Gracy Ma'am
I assure myself
you did not mean
WONDER....FULLY