Assassin
Ready to
Take casualties
Welcome to my mind
Fasten your seatbelts
Time to show you
A wordsmith
Trained in the art
Of expression
My pen targets the page
Spills venom, line by line
Words turn into bullets
That penetrate the mind
Assassin
Ready to
Take casualties
Welcome to my mind
Fasten your seatbelts
Time to show you
A wordsmith
Trained in the art
Of expression
My pen targets the page
Spills venom, line by line
Words turn into bullets
That penetrate the mind
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
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great! Your title? I would go with something like "Killer Verbiage" or "If Words Could Kill." Anyway, good stuff! ~ Geez.
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