This is always on one’s mind
where to consolation find
.''Where to go with you today
Your house or mine just fine ''anon''
as long as we both entwine
that is the ultimate desire divine
to swim in your ravine
let rivers flow from mine
to and within nature to shine
ere the summer ends
and we forget the golden mine
where then together we ought to dine
reverberating thoughts of the ultimate design
your velvety body
with a sandy hairy one of mine
we all together embrace
then sip some red wine
the finale must remain
a memory of ecstasy
yours and mine
{Jess Liked and edited this}
Comments
hello lovedly,
I like this poem very much! your rhyming is superb and keeps it fluidly moving! a good write!
p.s.
I know that Jess is gone, and I miss him. Is Ian gone, too? such a shame!
*hugs, Cat & eddy
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Thanks Cat
do you remember Jess and Ian
They I miss for their guidance
may they RIP
wherever souls.... if any do
hello lovedly
It's been some time since I have been here, and I am back to see such a great poem.
The rhyming lulls the reader into a dreamy state and fills them with ecstasy.
wonderful piece.
WELCOME IRE
and thanks
do read and enlighten me and all as much
I did not know either
Of the two you mentioned.
I found the piece very full of sex energy, and thus had my full attention! LOL.
Cery well written, the imagery supurb.
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