Time

Mystery in a circle of sixty,
You are man’s greatest obsession.
In unseen track you fly,
Lifting light and letting heavy crawl.
Undoubtedly present in every century,
In seconds, minutes and hours,
You turn today to yesterday and tomorrow to now.

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: North Central Nigeria , NGA

Comments

Time

Hello, Oriii,
What a stunning piece. Mysterious and thoughtful, but so obvious and significant. Really like this.
Thank you!
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Thank you Lavender I really

Thank you Lavender I really appreciate your thought

Thank you Teddy. I'm excited

Thank you Teddy. I'm excited you find it stunning.

Beautiful piece Ori

The piece takes one deep into self. So nice. Thanks.

I appreciate

Thank you so much for your thought and advice I do appreciate

I like...

your observations on time! I especially enjoyed: "Mystery in a circle of sixty." It sounds so "mysterious!" ~ Geezer.
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Thanks

Thank you Geezer I am glad u find the poem catchy and mysterious

Wow I'm so glad you thought

Wow I'm so glad you thought of that exceptional movie LUCY while reading my piece... Thank you