Beyond accusing anger
and burn of bitterness
wrought from beaten jealousies
of rank contempt
risen in fury and fatigue,
the touch of one hand
caught within another
is miraculous.
So we slowly stroll
across the pale sunlight
of September afternoon,
fingers intertwined,
palms pressed warm,
speaking of long years
spent as moments together.
Crowds cannot distract
us back to our forgotten rage,
nor cool breeze from unseen river
tempt either you or I
from this simple sharing
driving every doubt away.
The feel of your hand in mine
is sweet memory of ecstacy pressed
intimate in pleasure
of a wonderous joining
that brought our children
into being-
and now, I forget
why we had fought.
Comments
This is wonderful yes!
This I loved reading and think it a very good poem, I find no fault on the first read. And as I read it once more I find it still a fine poem and praise you for its creation.
Ann of the north with love.
Thank you Ann
I am glad you liked it so much.
LOL
Thanks Rosina, for your kind comments!
so lovely jim
i adore
'speaking of long years
spent as moments together'
your wife is a very lucky lady
love judy
xxxx
Thanks Judyanne,
But I am the luckier half of our marriage.
I wrote this sitting in the car as we ate lunch and talked, scribbling in those odd little moments of pause between talkiing, on the day we went down to Indianapolis after the fight we had.
So she was my editor on this one, heehee.
Would that every editor would be so...
:D
Thanks again.
Chrys,
The abrupt and well worn title...
...um...
...ah...
...well...
...because, in truth, it was a rushed afterthought, heehee.
You are right, it needs better, so I'll give it some thought.
Thanks Chrys,
Hey Ian
Can not...cannot...you're right, I changed it.
Burn instead of born...no, I meant burn, lol.
Yes, you are picky....and I would have it no other way, my friend.
I am so glad you find such enjoyment in my poem, Ian.