Drink

Drink
Otherwise known as an invitation to divulge secrets.

Secrets of your heart and your mind that may or may not be exposed, depending on the smile when your first walk in.

Drink
An offer to exchange thoughts

Thoughts that perk your mind to an accelerated pace, one that doesn’t stop until told too.

Drink
The basis of life.

Life that is ours to share, ours to grow, to fail, to feel… and to wonder, “what could possibly be better”.

Drink
Will you grab a drink with me?

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: canada

Favorite Poets: Aristotle

Comments

Nice poem

i think the poem was good. i like the idea and drink as a theme and title..having a drink of good thought share can be nice when with friends

thanks for the feedback.

Before the poem,

I love your profile-
"Think, or reflect, or sync up to the thoughts outweighing everything else in the room.
This is me. Now you know."
Though we would really like to know more about what poetry you read and like, it helps with suggestions.

The poem. Drink is the basis of life? My irony meter is on the blink, it's telling me there must be some in a poem about the liver bullet and mind macerater.

I'm guessing...

that [drink is symbolic not literal] here. Or if it is... that it could be anything, not necessarily alcohol? ~ Geezer.
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