Feel the pain
Passing through
Growling with each step
Making a mockery of you
You can’t even pace
Maybe a potion will help
Heal your heel
Hang your head
It’s only a passing itch
That you can’t scratch
Try new shoes
Try the towel wrap
But never stop marching
Even for your precious ache
Sep 01, 2019
Sore Feet
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Precious ache...`
reminds me of some people that I know. LoL I may decide to hijack those two words and use them for a title of my own. Thanks before hand, if in fact, I do. Yeah, yeah... I know, never give up and all that crap! I'm not giving up, just gonna sit a spell with my feet in a tub of hot water and Epsom salts. You made those aches and pains too real. This was fun and something that we all can relate to! Geezer.
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Precious Ache
Glad you enjoyed it. It was meant to be kinda fun but I know people like that too. Especially me lol.
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